I would open it with a pair of men in balaclavas chasing a thief and
I would drag the scene out in the chase scene as one of them shows
that they have powers. Then I would have them corner him in an ally
where there is a clock tower in the background, hands one minute to
twelve. Then I would have the thief pull out a gun and fire at one of
them in the head. Then I would have one take off his balaclava to
reveal it to be Gabriel Grey! Then I would have the thief run off and
I would have Grey kneel down and pull off the balaclava of the other
guy revealing it to be Peter Petrelli! Then I would have a fake out
for a moment and then the bullet rise from his forehead and fall to
the side. Then he would wake up and look around slightly confused.
Then I would have Grey say.
“I didn't know that you absorbed Claire's powers last!” and I
would have Peter frown deeper and I would have him say.
“I didn't.” and that would be when I would have the clock tower
chime twelve.
Then I would have the 'Heroes' intro.
I would then have Noah Bennet wake with Angela fade in focus. Then I
would have her say.
“Good. You're awake. You poor man, the twins did quite the number
on you.” in her cold tone. I would then have her walk over to the
window.
“How am I alive?” I would have him ask. Then I would her raise
her eyebrow.
“Claire.”
“But she's-” I would have him say in a mumble. Then I would have
her carry a smile.
“Dead?” then I would have her mouth go back to a state look.
“Well, now that Erika's out of the way, it's time you knew. When
the twins were born, when we knew that she was after them we knew
that we would have to hide their mother, however we all knew that
would be very difficult. Then providence gave us Alexandra Mercy,
Claire's doppelgänger, who fate would have it, was a French blogger,
so we were able to switch the two. Which was a mature thing for her
to do. When Erika was gone we did give her a chance for her to come
back, but she declined, poor thing she really did draw the short
straw when it comes to powers. Although we do keep her informed and
she keeps us informed too.”
“Who keeps her-”
“Informed? Well her brothers.”
“But she only has one.”
“Well, she does have one adopted brother but she does have two
biological, be it half, brothers. One of which manifested three years
before Erika caused that bomb to go off.” then I would have her
shrug. “And in my opinion, it's about time they met.”
“What's his power?”
“Same as his nephew.”
Then I would have him smile and nod.
“How long have I been in a coma?”
“A couple of years.”
“Well considering that you have lived fifteen years you don't look
older than a few years.” I would have Noah say. Then I would have
her smile.
“Well that is quite a story.”
Then I would have a flashback to Hiro Nakamora with his swards out
shouting “I have waited fifteen years for this!” Only for there
to be a bullet to be fired, I would have Hiro look down at him but
seeing no wound. Then I would have the man in-front fall revealing
Kimiko Nakamora with a gun raised with a line of smoke coming from
it. Then, as a call back I would then have one of them lift off his
helmet to reveal it to be Ando.
He would then look at them with a confusion. Then Ando would say;
“Hiro! Your sister has a power!” then I would have her have an
embarrassed sigh. As Hiro would look excited. And I would have him
ask; “Is this true?”
“Yes, Hiro, it is. I manifested shortly after you, and Ando, I have
two powers, the first is the ability to know when the timeline has
diverged, and the ability remember the original the event, for
example, I remember Claire died but it was Jackie, I also remember
that Peter Petrelli exploded but he didn't, I also remember who
really spilt my drink.” I would have her start her eyes sliding to
Ando.
That would be when he would ask why she never revealed this before.
Then she would say; “Father, he told me of his power and told me
that it would be best to keep this part of me secret, for he said
that it would save the world when a time would come when formality
and respect are no longer important. So, I am beginning to see that
this was the time that he was talking about. Now my second power, is
to reverse time-damage on physical contact. Like for instance!”
then I would have her walk up to him and give him a forced hug for
him to squees her but I would not show his face. I would then have
her pull back and say; “Look in the mirror.” then when he does he
realises that he looks exactly like he did before he went back in
time. Then I would have his fists in the air and shout; “I'm young
again!”
Then I would have her say; “Well you were never old! Any way now
that you've got your powers back aren't you forgetting someone?”
Then he would have a lost look about him and then I would have her
shout; “Mohider!”
Then as he disappears I would transition to the present. I would have
Noah smile and nod and comment; “So...Hiro's sister...Who would've
known...”
“No-one, the girl kept her secret quite well!” they would then be
interrupted by Peter Petrelli with a confused look on his face. Then
I would have him look around. Then I would have Noah say; “Long
time no see Peter! How are you?” then I would have him just shake
his head. “I got shot and I didn't die.” (Just as a family call
back) Then I would have him explain what happened. Then I would have
Angela sigh then I would have her tell him; “I think I know what's
going on Peter.” then they would both look at her with confusion
and she would look at the pair of them as if they had dribbled on
their shirts. “Come now, it's obvious! Your old powers are coming
back!”
“All of them?” I would have Noah ask worriedly.
“Appears so!” Or something of that effect. Then I would have
Peter say “That's brilliant!” then leave to tell Grey then I
would have Noah look concerned and say “That's not what I meant.”
Then I would have Peter drive up to his flat. Have a flash back when
they first became truly friends, by having it take place sometime
shortly after the carnival and have Peter sitting across the grave of
his brother with Gabriel Gray next to him looking at the grave too.
Then I would have Gabriel say something like “I know I don't
deserve your forgiveness but I am sorry.” then I would have Peter
say “No, you don't.” I would then have Peter and Gabriel lay down
flowers. Then I would have him look at the grave stone.
“I swear that I will make it up to you.” I would have him say, or
something of that effect. Then I would have them walk away from the
grave to see a man running with a purse with an old woman then I
would have them use their powers to take the burglar down and then I
would have Peter give the purse back to the old woman.
Then I would end the flash back with Peter pulling up to his flat. He
would knock hearing nothing then I would have him knock again and hen
again an on the final time I would have him then go in knowing that
something is wrong. Then I would have him look around seeing that
nobody's home I would have him look at the clock which is smashed at
eleven o'clock. Then I would have him look around I would have him
skim over the painting of him exploding and then I would have him
call the others to tell them that Gabriel is missing.
Then I would have him drive off to look for him mean while I would
give a flashback that will give them the reason that they started to
wear the balaclavas and I would establish that there are Sylar
copycats. Then I would end the episode with a paper with the the
headline; Sylar Returns! Subheading; Or is it one of his many
copycats? With a photo of Matt Parkman dead, with his head cut open
from the forehead!
Then next five episodes I would have Peter and the others to look for
Gabriel Gray and I would have him correct the others sometimes for
calling him Sylar, saying that the Sylar side of him is dead and I
would show flashbacks to prove it. I would even show flashbacks that
would give the audience the experience of seeing their brotherly bond
develop until Peter was truly ready to forgive him. Then with each
episode I would have a clock counting down when it is of the clock
until episode six.
I would have the episode at the end where Tommy walking in his school
at night alone from a detention or something and then I would have
him be flown against a clock and the clock will be frozen at six
o'clock and he would stay there, like he is being held there by an
invisible hand is keeping him there. Then I would have a man in the
shadows come forward and point his finger across his head then the
blood would fall. Then I would have Emily come out after going to the
bathroom and then see what's going on then I would have her run up to
the man and take him down with Tommy falling lying in a pool of his
own blood. Then I would her see that this man is not Sylar but his
father!
Then the next four episodes be all about finding Gray senior and
clear Gabriel's name. Then I would have on the eleventh I would have
Peter get a tip to where his father lives and I would have him drive
to that place. Then I would have him knock on the door four times.
Hearing nothing I would have him open the door then I would have a
faint buzzing noise as he would look around for anyone but seeing
another broken clock at one o'clock. That would be when I would have
Peter go to leave only for the door to swing shut to reveal a
seemingly resent corpse of Gabriel's father!
This would be when Peter would receive a call from Gabriel Gray. Then
I would have him answer it. Then I would have him shout something
like “Gabriel! What the Hell do you know how worried we've been!”
That would be when I would have him here Gabriel sob.
“I'm sorry! I-I-He kidnapped me months ago! He then read my mind to
find out where the others were!” he would sob. “I couldn't take
it any more! Then I-I-I killed him! My own father!”
Then I would have Peter calm him down and then ask him where they
should meet. Then he would say the place where Peter almost exploded
at the end of season one. Then I would have him drive to the place
and then I would have him walk up to the place facing a quite calm
Gabriel Gray, then I would have them transition to a painting, the
painting that Sylar painted in season one!
Then at the start of the credits I would the reveal that the final
episode would be called; How To Stop An Exploding Man?.
Now what do you think has happened or is going on? Well all will be
answered in the final episode.
I would open it with Gabriel walking to where Matt has been hanging
for a while, still laughing. That would be when he would look
concerned.
“Matt! How did you get in this state?” I would have him ask. Then
I would have him reply with a laugh.
“Why're you laughing?” I would have him ask.
“Oh, 'cause it's absurd!”
“What's absurd?” I would have him ask.
“'cause you never left!” I'd have Matt laugh. That would be when
I would have Gabriel reach out his hand and pull for a moment then I
would have the hand let go and his face change and smile, but this is
not
the smile or face of Gabriel Gray, but the smile of Sylar!
“Now I have!” I would have him say and then I would have his
finger start to slide across the screen, with the Heroes title card
to fill in the rest of the scene. Then I would have it go back to the
present where Peter would come up to him all concerned.
“Gabriel are you alright?” I would have him ask.
“Perfect, now that you're here Peter.” I would have him say with
a sinister tone. Then I would have him be taken back by that for a
moment.
“What?” I would have him ask slightly confused.
“Do
you not see? It's all about you. See I knew that you still had your
old powers the moment that you got them back, but there seemed to be
something in your head that stopped them coming out. Maybe it was
what your father did but there seemed to be a grain in that clockwork
in your mind. So, I thought that by fighting you that grain would
dislodge but sadly I was disappointed and that almost costed me my
body. Still, I knew while I was in the subconsciousness of Matt's
mind I came to the realisation that I would have to come up with a
different tactic. Then it came to me, that I would have to let things
happen and wait until you used your older powers. Then came another
question; how would I know when you would use your powers? That was
when it came to me, I would have to get close to you, but then the
question was; how? After all I knew that you would never become my
friend not even if I paid you. Then I remembered that I knew someone
who would. Gabriel Gray the version of me before my powers. In fact
if I had met you back then then we would have been friends instantly.
Now the question was how could I get you to meet him? This was simple
after all, all I needed to do was make myself known and then put that
version of me back into my body, but he had to have enough of me in
him for suspicion to be averted but that would fade out over time.
This part of my plan worked perfectly, then I found out, from your
mother's mind that I, or Gabriel was going to save that girlfriend of
yours. So when he came back I knew that I would have to manipulate
the situation to get you and him to at least sow seeds of friendship.
So I sent a thought to Matt's wife, one simple thought that had her
demand poor Matt to get rid of him. So I was able to subconsciously
manipulate Matt into sending Gabriel into a dream world where time is
longer. Then I had him build a wall around him as I waited for you to
arrive. Then, when you did, I was able to use Matt to send you to
that place and that was when I set a wall up that could only come
down if you started to reach out to him. Then everything went exactly
as planed. It was my lucky day but what made that day even more
golden was that I was able to see an opportunity to do something that
I have always wanted to, destroy Noah Bennet. How did I do this?
Simple, it was only one simple thought that had her climb up that
ferris wheel and caused her to jump.”
This would be when I would have Peter turn and run. Then I would have
Sylar shake his head.
“No.” then he would flick his finger towards him and Peter would
be pulled back and Sylar would get close to him and say, “How many
people are in those buildings?” Then he would stay there and become
more submissive.
“Now
as I was saying, when that happened everything went up hill for me. I
was able to use my influence over Matt to get him to sell himself to
the highest bidder and then I was easily able to manipulate Erica and
her hate 'evos' like ourselves, in fact it was she
who came up with the name, to stir up more hate for people like
ourselves, more specifically people who don't believe in evolution.
Then came another gold day, the day of when Mohinder was framed for
that explosion, more opportunities came up like I was able to get
Matt to be the head of a prison, which meant that I would be able to
feast on more people like us the moment that you could use your old
powers again. Then when this did happen you would set off an alarm in
poor Gabriel Gray's head and sent him to his death.”
Then I would have Peter ask “And why did you do this now?”
“Because, so many opportunities came from that explosion. Which led
me to a question; what would happen if there was another? I wonder
how many opportunities would open up then? And now that all but one
of your powers have returned I was thinking that that power will show
itself and you know the one and oh look! It's come!”
Then I would let the camera drop to Peter's hand which is glowing and
his bones were faintly showing (Ted's power). Then I would have Sylar
smile. That would be when I would have Peter call Hiro but his phone
is turned off, then he would call Claire who's phone is also turned
off which I would pan out revealing that Hiro, Claire, Angela and
everyone else from Reborn at Tommy''s funeral. Then I would have Hiro
go back in time to save his adopted son, but he would arrive too
late, and that would be when “Sylar's father” would run into him
to shape-shift back into Sylar! He would then smirk and then he would
look at him and say “I will spare you if you deliver this message
to the cheerleader” then I would have him lean in close and whisper
something in his ear and pull back then send him into the future.
I would then cut back to Peter who is panicking and his state is
getting worse knowing that he can't get into contact with them.
“Oh,
that's useless, did you not know? Theyre all at a funeral, your grate
nephews' to be precise.” I would have Sylar explain. “And don't
think that Mohinder can help, his hands are quite full at the
moment.”
Then I would cut to Mohinder working as a doctor with a patient to
reveal that the patient is Noah but he has wounds that only Mohinder
can deal with. Then I would cut back to Peter who up on realising
that there is nobody coming forces himself calming down. That would
be when something hit the ground with a crack. That would be when I
would reveal that it is a woman that is dead. I would have him look
back to Sylar who would smile and shrug. Then more and more people
would drop causing Peter to go back into his panic attack as Sylar
would start using his powers to torture him to get him even more
worked up and then I would have Peter turn away to fly off and then I
would pan back for Peter to reveal Nathan Petrelli.
“Peter, you saved the cheerleader so that we could save the world.”
I would have him say as he would walk up to him and wrap his arms
around him. “Or at least that's what I would have said if I was
still alive.” Then I would have him pull away to see Sylar smiling.
Then this would be when Peter would explode!
Then when they are berrying the Tommy I would have them see the
explosion on the horizon. I would have Milina turn to her mother and
ask “What's that?”
“I thought that we stopped it!” I would have Claire say.
Then I would cut to Noah and Mohider look at the horizon with dread.
That would be when the episode will end saying end of volume, it is
your choice to see the next volume. Then the theme would play out
along side clockwork to indicate that Sylar will be the main
benefactor from here out.
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